tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post203106671324417702..comments2023-04-10T03:20:23.344-05:00Comments on HanLeiaFanFicWriters: The Quickie Challenge (#1)Zyrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04860113813294303312noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-28096890917756229112011-10-17T22:44:15.622-05:002011-10-17T22:44:15.622-05:00I really liked that part about Han's thoughts ...I really liked that part about Han's thoughts on shutting the old Leia up. Liked the characterization too. Nice job!amara zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03344117896874708549noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-18586913588512742042011-10-17T20:28:44.424-05:002011-10-17T20:28:44.424-05:00this was fun. I always love it when Leia's on...this was fun. I always love it when Leia's on a rant and Han shuts her up ;-)<br /><br />I've promised myself that if I clean up one more chapter of the Bespin story this week, I can write a quickie as a reward.jzhanfanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07376308728767558575noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-26952082621197031492011-10-16T18:21:19.613-05:002011-10-16T18:21:19.613-05:00Thanks all, and thanks to the P and Z for allowing...Thanks all, and thanks to the P and Z for allowing these contributions. Again, the thing I like about this blog is that it offers encouragement to tackle subjects that (at least I) wouldn't normally touch. I look forward to seeing more of these spring up. :)Elivagarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08444154877873416316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-10238170659788059102011-10-16T15:44:09.007-05:002011-10-16T15:44:09.007-05:00If you have trouble posting it in a PM on ff.net (...If you have trouble posting it in a PM on ff.net (like it doesn't like italics) just let us know and we can give you an email address via PM on ff.net.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-53353338132771743132011-10-16T15:39:18.530-05:002011-10-16T15:39:18.530-05:00Great! Send me or Push a message via ff.net and w...Great! Send me or Push a message via ff.net and we'll get it posted :)Zyrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04860113813294303312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-79749011404634322572011-10-16T15:34:26.966-05:002011-10-16T15:34:26.966-05:00This was fun! I could picture the scene in my head...This was fun! I could picture the scene in my head. Great job!<br /><br />I actually wrote something as well. How would I go about sending it to someone?LadyxBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10789712138999187511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-13273621675723769022011-10-15T15:45:19.185-05:002011-10-15T15:45:19.185-05:00Well done! Your characterization was spot on! You&...Well done! Your characterization was spot on! You've set the stakes pretty high for this challenge! <br />And bravo for being the first one to write a quickie! <br /><br />I'm looking forward to the next! :-)<br /><br />Maybe one from Push or Zyra? ;-)emmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09586595466341139745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-79592958265544638032011-10-15T12:42:54.768-05:002011-10-15T12:42:54.768-05:00Oh, this is fun :) Nice job with this. And glad ...Oh, this is fun :) Nice job with this. And glad you stepped up and started us off without the closet so other people know they don't HAVE to do it that way. Everything Push pointed out specifically I enjoyed as well. Knowing if he wasn't in trouble already he would be, throwing stuff on the floor to get her attention. But I also love that even though she is obviously very angry and frustrated he remains calm and goes from figuring out what's going on to using the time wisely :) Great job!Zyrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04860113813294303312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-76512207718482828852011-10-14T23:50:46.572-05:002011-10-14T23:50:46.572-05:00What a really great piece. I love the entire seco...What a really great piece. I love the entire second paragraph from the contrast of the graceful flowing robes to her 'less than graceful motions' to her talking to herself to Han worrying if he's in trouble or, if not, soon will be. I could picture this entire scene perfectly. Magnificent job.<br /><br />I loved the way you had Han tackle the problem with joining her in her mess making. Again, could totally picture him doing that. And his flashback to the Leia of old and this sentence: "The Leia who just wouldn’t shut up sometimes, and who he secretly wished he could make shut up just by pressing his lips against hers, controlling her wild tongue with his." :-)<br /><br />Okay the quickie was great, Leia challenging him with the fourteen minutes and adding to the mess of the desk/office...but when Leia asked him for the datacard afterwards I about fell out of my chair. Priceless! A perfect ending.<br /><br />Thanks again for sharing and Bravo!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com