tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post2761740058762573237..comments2023-04-10T03:20:23.344-05:00Comments on HanLeiaFanFicWriters: Story Submission by KD Solo: Not Good EnoughZyrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04860113813294303312noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-48636177469356056512013-07-04T19:11:23.744-05:002013-07-04T19:11:23.744-05:00I assume you mean the list of curses? I thought th...I assume you mean the list of curses? I thought that was kind of neat. And good title on it. :) There's some other lists floating around like things in our universe translated to things in the GFFA, like a refrigerator. And I might have seen one on drinks in the GFFA. But there's some of that on wookiepedia too.amara zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03344117896874708549noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-7173053049196803232013-07-03T15:10:38.743-05:002013-07-03T15:10:38.743-05:00Now that was interesting.Now that was interesting.KDSOLOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17527593785577170182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-7119970239496364122013-07-01T19:18:07.057-05:002013-07-01T19:18:07.057-05:00That's cool. I think that's a good distinc...That's cool. I think that's a good distinction to make. I seem to remember flenk or something like that used in fanfic or the EU. But I did find a nice summary of SW cursing a while back. :)<br /><br />http://wayback.archive.org/web/20120512030929/http://blogs.starwars.com/abelgpena/5amara zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03344117896874708549noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-37132515713141073862013-07-01T16:48:59.644-05:002013-07-01T16:48:59.644-05:00I really don't know if anyone goes back to loo...I really don't know if anyone goes back to look at this after the fact but like I said, I didn't even realize it was posted and I feel terrible about not addressing your comments. I just wanted to make a couple of comments anyway. Someone may see, so here goes.I am so happy you all liked it. I was very nervous about it.It is very rare we see Han in bed with another woman but it was something I wanted to write (without the details of course). I certainly don't think Han would have been celibate.I think he would have had quite a few admirers. I wrote Leia like this, I'm not sure why. Just another point of view. Something I haven't done. As for the language, I know it is a bit raw for the GFFA, but I do remember Han as being the one character (in A New Hope) that curses a bit. Now I do not believe Big George would have had them dropping the F-bomb everywhere but Han was a bit rough around the edges so I'm sure his language did get a bit colorful at times and the only way I could really think to distinguish between Leia sex and anonymous chick sex was to drop the F-bomb. LOL. Hope that explains some things. Hope I can continue to write and post.I have been really enjoying the blog. Thanks Zara and Push!!!!!!KDSOLOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17527593785577170182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-54582274016776975782013-06-28T19:04:06.973-05:002013-06-28T19:04:06.973-05:00Thanks everyone. I am here everyday and didn't...Thanks everyone. I am here everyday and didn't even know this was here. Lol.I enjoyed writing the story and no, I do not think Han was a "good boy" for 3 long years. KDSOLOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17527593785577170182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-39603909981241353782013-06-23T23:18:26.334-05:002013-06-23T23:18:26.334-05:00Very well done. Very well done. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-24555031403585247792013-06-18T18:18:16.335-05:002013-06-18T18:18:16.335-05:00This is my favorite type of H/L story, when they a...This is my favorite type of H/L story, when they are pining for/hot for each other, and are in denial. Poor Leia, feeling jealous and not wanting to admit it. We have all been there, haven't we? And it is not fun. I like his POV too. He is more cocky than she is, but they both have some insecurity. Thanks for sharing the story.Lizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08112524366742069257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-55421309989890077052013-06-17T20:24:51.069-05:002013-06-17T20:24:51.069-05:00I am having trouble leaving notes on this site, bu...I am having trouble leaving notes on this site, but I wanted to say that I really liked this story!Lizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08112524366742069257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-3735175294216963912013-06-14T20:30:45.817-05:002013-06-14T20:30:45.817-05:00I thought you did a nice job with this. You captur...I thought you did a nice job with this. You captured their emotions during that time beautifully and made me feel what they are feeling. Some of the word choices were off putting to me though. Don’t mind cursing, but it was a bit jarring for me. I’m sure they have much cooler things they say in the GFFA. And Leia repeatedly calling herself a monster was a tad harsh. But overall, nicely done and a good read.<br />amara zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03344117896874708549noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-13481422376656564172013-06-14T18:53:13.504-05:002013-06-14T18:53:13.504-05:00This packs quite a punch. You've given us a re...This packs quite a punch. You've given us a real rollercoaster ride with their emotions here, and I found it very believable. I also very much enjoyed your style of writing. However I do not think Leia would have such a low opinion of herself. I have always thought her reluctance to get involved with Han was due more to the differences in their backgrounds combined with her political status than her not liking herself, just my two cents. But overall I really enjoyed this. Well done. claire1976https://www.blogger.com/profile/04285049568087268653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-11290262367962870332013-06-14T16:02:41.337-05:002013-06-14T16:02:41.337-05:00This is an era that I never really explore in my o...This is an era that I never really explore in my own writing, so I always appreciate when other people do. <br /><br />I give you a lot of credit for putting Han in that position. I think often times we make him out to be way more of a saint than he deserves. I'm not sure there are a lot of men out there, and certainly not any with as much appeal as him, who would be willing to hold out for years with only the promise of potential sex from one woman who doesn't seem to want to give it to him. But I do like that in spite of giving into his urges he recognizes that it is going to be tougher to make things work with Leia if she keeps seeing him sleep with all kinds of other women.<br /><br />I love Leia's thoughts here, too. How she is already feeling things for him but is unwilling to act on them and doesn't think she would mean anything to him. The last paragraph of Han's especially is powerful, though. Really well done. Thanks for writing!Zyrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04860113813294303312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-7931647299560907892013-06-14T06:13:59.132-05:002013-06-14T06:13:59.132-05:00I love this! And this paragraph made me feel hot: ...I love this! And this paragraph made me feel hot: I just know that she hasn’t been touched by another man and I’d take her slow. I’d love her and I’d be the only man to ever love her like that. I want to be the only lover she’ll ever have.Lily Skywalkernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-62794682225366205352013-06-13T23:05:18.040-05:002013-06-13T23:05:18.040-05:00That was gut wrenching and wonderfully written :)That was gut wrenching and wonderfully written :)StatsGrandma's Office Hourshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06128031887455320394noreply@blogger.com