tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post4519924962835785489..comments2023-04-10T03:20:23.344-05:00Comments on HanLeiaFanFicWriters: August Writing Challenge: Submission #2 by Knighted RogueZyrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04860113813294303312noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-5790595976304017782016-10-03T01:15:40.936-05:002016-10-03T01:15:40.936-05:00Thank you! I loved writing it! Kicking COPL to the...Thank you! I loved writing it! Kicking COPL to the curb is a great feeling, I will admit! :)KnightedRoguehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01938396408641107066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-16329104594557134922016-10-02T22:33:17.512-05:002016-10-02T22:33:17.512-05:00oh em friggin geee! this so soooo SOOOOOO good. I ...oh em friggin geee! this so soooo SOOOOOO good. I loved it. yay! multiple loves! le sigh. Zolo77https://www.blogger.com/profile/18025887661570434352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-1394643097364516702016-10-02T22:32:24.504-05:002016-10-02T22:32:24.504-05:00oh em friggin geee! this so soooo SOOOOOO good. I ...oh em friggin geee! this so soooo SOOOOOO good. I loved it. yay! multiple loves! le sigh. Zolo77https://www.blogger.com/profile/18025887661570434352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-26334124896936563622016-09-21T07:59:31.052-05:002016-09-21T07:59:31.052-05:00No doubt! That book still bugs the tar out of me. ...No doubt! That book still bugs the tar out of me. Even if it's not canon now. I loved how she said no to the offer like that. Been awesome if it had went down this way instead. That was great how she confused Han for a moment and then he's like oh, hell yes. That was great and I could imagine that happening.amara zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03344117896874708549noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-66210418546986086762016-09-20T02:00:59.901-05:002016-09-20T02:00:59.901-05:00Thanks! I super loved shutting Dave Wolverton down...Thanks! I super loved shutting Dave Wolverton down!KnightedRoguehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01938396408641107066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-26821900730718730862016-09-20T01:59:40.209-05:002016-09-20T01:59:40.209-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.KnightedRoguehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01938396408641107066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-8185312402371110512016-09-19T20:43:53.084-05:002016-09-19T20:43:53.084-05:00Wow. Smoking, smoking hot. Great read and just wha...Wow. Smoking, smoking hot. Great read and just what COPL needed. ;)amara zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03344117896874708549noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-49203121213782823712016-09-06T18:10:54.572-05:002016-09-06T18:10:54.572-05:00Thanks, Sharoni! The POV was intentionally set as ...Thanks, Sharoni! The POV was intentionally set as third person limited to Han. It was a personal challenge. Obviously, as a woman, my experience is different, so I usually write sex from Leia's POV. Or I write something heavily stylized and hope no one notices that there isn't a ton of actual sex involved. Makes it easier. :-) So writing this from Han's perspective was a challenge, and I'm glad it paid off for you! Thank you for your kind words!KnightedRoguehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01938396408641107066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-50687586914464256202016-09-03T04:48:50.221-05:002016-09-03T04:48:50.221-05:00So many things to love about this little fic!
Fi...So many things to love about this little fic! <br /><br />First, Han pressing Leia up against a wall is actually my favourite type of romp, so thank you for that!<br /><br />I love that her response to Han's "scrutiny" re: being drunk in her office in the middle of her work day is a mere, "shameful". Totally laughed out loud at that line.<br /><br />Like the true gentleman that he is, other than ensuring her safety and supporting her head, he also knows he has to change it up and allow her reach her own release first. <br /><br />I think what I most appreciate about this fic is Han's little thoughts here and there. It's essentially written from his perspective. Not sure if you intended it to be that way, but I love it. Sharonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03029875334499250554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-24880877406385678292016-09-01T17:24:10.173-05:002016-09-01T17:24:10.173-05:00Exactly! Let's just erase COPL from our memori...Exactly! Let's just erase COPL from our memories! And the cleaning droid is probably used to their shenanigans by now. :D Thank you!KnightedRoguehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01938396408641107066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-54780719904154954032016-09-01T02:17:49.484-05:002016-09-01T02:17:49.484-05:00Did Han ever lock that door?
This was hot and fun...Did Han ever lock that door?<br /><br />This was hot and fun. But anything that retells or properly addresses the ridiculous COPL plotline gets extra kudos. I love that she kicked them but kept the wine.<br /><br />That section of wall though... Um. Wouldn't have thought of that. Wonder what the cleaning droid thinks?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02970253511235831070noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-22984669183492527992016-08-21T12:22:40.934-05:002016-08-21T12:22:40.934-05:00Hahaha. Han has got to be the ultimate gentleman i...Hahaha. Han has got to be the ultimate gentleman if you look at his track record in fanfic. What a man! :D When I finished my first draft of this fic, Han and Leia both came off very cold and domineering. It was so weird. Usually I'm proof reading for sugar sweetness overload. :D So I'm glad you got that sense from Han - that he cares - because he seemed oddly removed from the situation in the first draft. Eek. :D Thank you for your kind words!KnightedRoguehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01938396408641107066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-3908744552411751862016-08-21T12:15:42.766-05:002016-08-21T12:15:42.766-05:00I laughed out loud at "You just got lucky, so...I laughed out loud at "You just got lucky, son!" Hahaha. Thanks for your kind words; after you two did your excellent "drunk at a reception" story, I had to think of another reason Leia would start throwing back shots. And all I could really make work was the piece of crap COPL proposals. Lol. Thank you!KnightedRoguehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01938396408641107066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-61436502157704815422016-08-21T07:49:13.688-05:002016-08-21T07:49:13.688-05:00Great story! I love the way this scene escalates s...Great story! I love the way this scene escalates so quickly, and it really fits the theme; they're both a little blurry, the entire thing is spontaneous and urgent and hot as blazes. I love how even in a moment that should be totally out of control, Han shows his concern for Leia...I chuckled at his reference to head injury precautions. Beyond that, he makes certain this is what she wants, to ensuring she she is (ahem)'looked after'. Such a gentleman ;)<br />Thank you for a great read. And no light fixtures, pictures, or knick-knacks on that wall, please :) Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13910395768942058868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-76721649706617938052016-08-21T07:28:45.616-05:002016-08-21T07:28:45.616-05:00Lovely stuff, Knighted Rogue! One of my favourite ...Lovely stuff, Knighted Rogue! One of my favourite parts has to be Han's dim awareness and slight confusion when Leia tells him he needs to lock the door, then realization dawns when she pulls the hem of his shirt free. <br /><br />*Oh.* <br />*Oh hell yes* (!) <br /><br />Hahaha. You just got lucky, son! :) <br /><br />I also enjoyed the fact that Leia kicked the Hapans out of her office, but kept the wine.... Smart woman. <br /><br />Another favourite moment for me is that little chime of emotion near the end when Han recognizes that it never occurred to him that Leia would accept such a proposal, because they're rock-solid and it's not even a remote possibility. Even after 22 years, I still think Mr. Wolverton needs a right good kick in the shins.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing your story! :) Erin Darrochhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17022044977128626948noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-19092187436227204752016-08-20T22:02:15.614-05:002016-08-20T22:02:15.614-05:00Thank you! That wall, man. I hope Leia has the sen...Thank you! That wall, man. I hope Leia has the sense to keep that wall nice and blank for more shenanigans. Prime real estate. ;)KnightedRoguehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01938396408641107066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-30138815512440542122016-08-20T21:07:34.030-05:002016-08-20T21:07:34.030-05:00I absolutely love the reference to a little propos...I absolutely love the reference to a little proposal from the Hapans. And I think I loved even more that Han had the forethought to make sure Leia left a blank wall in her office for just this one potential occasion. Really great.Zyrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04860113813294303312noreply@blogger.com