tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post5131321454270722317..comments2023-04-10T03:20:23.344-05:00Comments on HanLeiaFanFicWriters: Valentine's Challenge: The Sequel. Submission #10Zyrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04860113813294303312noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-67962092615264997742013-03-06T13:52:43.704-06:002013-03-06T13:52:43.704-06:00I loved the metaphors. The air and water reference...I loved the metaphors. The air and water references were such a simple way to explain their need for one another while at the same time being complicated by their resistance to give into their feelings and attraction.Charhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01569757105389994513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-72449756099401777002013-02-28T21:52:15.339-06:002013-02-28T21:52:15.339-06:00Always great to get new writers involved! Thanks ...Always great to get new writers involved! Thanks so much for sharing this. I really loved using the air and water analogies and how they truly need each other. Very nice :)Zyrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04860113813294303312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-69049189854369162162013-02-27T09:55:17.754-06:002013-02-27T09:55:17.754-06:00Thanks so much for the kind words, everyone. I lo...Thanks so much for the kind words, everyone. I look forward to posting more -- as soon as I'm done grading a stack of midterms :)StatsGrandma's Office Hourshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06128031887455320394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-41841230708071083632013-02-27T06:25:26.035-06:002013-02-27T06:25:26.035-06:00My favorite line: "That she wakes up next to ...My favorite line: "That she wakes up next to me is what gives me breath each day."<br /><br />Really powerful and romantic. jzhanfanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07376308728767558575noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-37903680755604197172013-02-26T23:44:25.691-06:002013-02-26T23:44:25.691-06:00Nice one! I like the character insights. Looking...Nice one! I like the character insights. Looking forward to more.Lizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08112524366742069257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-9670494827440770332013-02-26T23:44:16.640-06:002013-02-26T23:44:16.640-06:00Nice one! I like the character insights. Looking...Nice one! I like the character insights. Looking forward to more.Lizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08112524366742069257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-55098466309252307012013-02-26T16:53:51.475-06:002013-02-26T16:53:51.475-06:00That was very beautifull and romantic! <3 I lik...That was very beautifull and romantic! <3 I liked the most when Leia tells about her duty to the world by her father and how Han changed everything!<br /><br />I'm so happy and excited there's more to come from you! :)Lily Skywalkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02300836457414365016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-86046755286299042092013-02-26T10:20:25.831-06:002013-02-26T10:20:25.831-06:00I've written in two other fandoms in the past;...I've written in two other fandoms in the past; it's what I do to relax. Why it took me so long to get to H+L, I have no idea, but my granddaughter, who is 6, has fallen in love with "Star Wars," and it impelled me to sit down and work out with this couple. I've been a fan since ANH came out in 1977.<br /><br />Thanks for the kind words. I've handed Z another one, and I've got one in the works.StatsGrandma's Office Hourshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06128031887455320394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-63356422852440537042013-02-26T08:41:06.319-06:002013-02-26T08:41:06.319-06:00Very nice. Love the way you weaved the metaphors ...Very nice. Love the way you weaved the metaphors throughout the story. I'm partial to Han's water references but Leia's air was spot-on, too. Looking forward to seeing more from you! Thanks for sharing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-48429694377929639972013-02-26T01:55:22.565-06:002013-02-26T01:55:22.565-06:00Oh wow, this is your first fic? You did sooo good ...Oh wow, this is your first fic? You did sooo good with this. The air/water idea is so effective in describing just how much they are dependent on each other. The metaphors you use throughout are very cleverly thought out. I love the line about the tsunami hitting when Leia realised she loved him, awesome. And the paragraph about Han's eyes is just gorgeous! <br /><br />Excellent job! Please keep writing. :)claire1976https://www.blogger.com/profile/04285049568087268653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-15671131237123026022013-02-26T00:28:44.804-06:002013-02-26T00:28:44.804-06:00Amazing!! Beautifully written and I love the way t...Amazing!! Beautifully written and I love the way they described each other :)- ashleeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com