tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post6873100289800155672..comments2023-04-10T03:20:23.344-05:00Comments on HanLeiaFanFicWriters: Are We Having Fun Yet?Zyrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04860113813294303312noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-18399267163985686982011-03-21T19:38:36.193-05:002011-03-21T19:38:36.193-05:00Yes, it wasn't fun. Well, attacking my sister ...Yes, it wasn't fun. Well, attacking my sister with a lightsaber was fun. The injury was not!Digshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09844539406878253011noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-78350920791311808282011-03-21T19:26:55.391-05:002011-03-21T19:26:55.391-05:00I guess i could get my boys and the neighborhood k...I guess i could get my boys and the neighborhood kids together and do some real life research. I hate to end up on crutches though.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-25175743456128330252011-03-21T19:12:35.383-05:002011-03-21T19:12:35.383-05:00For the one small lightsaber battle I wrote, I qui...For the one small lightsaber battle I wrote, I quite enjoyed it. Although, I might have cheated as I spent an hour before hand with a random selection of Star Wars books and read only the battle scenes in them. Got myself in the fighting frame of mind :D<br /><br />It is difficult in that you can't really draw on from personal experience. Well, I certainly couldn't. The last time I held (played with) with a lightsaber, I ended up on crutches for weeks! (...seriously!)Digshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09844539406878253011noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-82446142311886894522011-03-17T18:34:49.725-05:002011-03-17T18:34:49.725-05:00Please finish "Impressions". I loved it!...Please finish "Impressions". I loved it! I was actually reading it last night and I noticed something a little familiar about it. But we can discuss in private Push. ;)JarikSolohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12392235112650407700noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-5261272859557038002011-03-16T14:21:05.908-05:002011-03-16T14:21:05.908-05:00Okay, you got me. I just did a quick scan. See? ...Okay, you got me. I just did a quick scan. See? That's why YOU can't trust ME to beta your stories for grammar. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-27285625603903400762011-03-16T14:18:21.085-05:002011-03-16T14:18:21.085-05:00You're welcome :) And seriously, you don'...You're welcome :) And seriously, you don't know where the semi colon is? <br /><br />"... action scenes; I'd much prefer a nice..."<br /><br />It's right there!Zyrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04860113813294303312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-60727691630770107922011-03-16T13:15:24.128-05:002011-03-16T13:15:24.128-05:00Thank you, I do intend on completing "Impress...Thank you, I do intend on completing "Impressions" some day, but nothing is coming to me as to how... As for my action scene in the that story, Zyra helped me out greatly with it and I am not only eternally grateful to her for that, but I am counting on the same assistance when I get to the action in my current story. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-10957026018332503972011-03-16T12:07:09.919-05:002011-03-16T12:07:09.919-05:00You could write a kissing battle, haha. :P
The ac...You could write a kissing battle, haha. :P<br /><br />The action that I have seen you write seemed fine to me, at least I wouldn't have guessed you were insecure about it. One sticks out in my mind...I think it was in "Shifting Impressions" (which by the way I would kill to see more of),although it was a very small sequence, I still have the image in my head.Elivagarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08444154877873416316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-20146808919901931022011-03-15T23:10:20.488-05:002011-03-15T23:10:20.488-05:00Thanks for the comment! But I think you are being...Thanks for the comment! But I think you are being kind on my semi-colon usage because I couldn't find a one in that post! :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-7018781355732414132011-03-15T20:58:14.409-05:002011-03-15T20:58:14.409-05:00Well, since we are always lamenting about lack of ...Well, since we are always lamenting about lack of feedback, I should comment, right? ;) <br /><br />First, I will say that there are no rules that a lightsaber fight can't end with a kiss, for sure! Though probably not between the two combatants. Second, I'm glad that you got hooked and I'll be interested to see what you do with the action scenes. I don't think you're as bad at them as you think you are. Third, as your beta reader, I'd just like to say that you had a very appropriate use of semi-colon there, good job. And lastly, if you find a way to retire off your money from posting Han and Leia stories online, please let me know!Zyrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04860113813294303312noreply@blogger.com