tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post7406880855426874986..comments2023-04-10T03:20:23.344-05:00Comments on HanLeiaFanFicWriters: Joint Story: The Sequel - Chapter 21Zyrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04860113813294303312noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-66903048559786495102013-05-11T15:52:43.968-05:002013-05-11T15:52:43.968-05:00I really loved this chapter, Z. I really loved this chapter, Z. Elivagarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08444154877873416316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-23122514795444948802013-05-11T11:05:31.366-05:002013-05-11T11:05:31.366-05:00i keep looking for a new chapter being up!i keep looking for a new chapter being up!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-73970225395842164822013-05-10T16:23:27.088-05:002013-05-10T16:23:27.088-05:00I don't know, it was probably more of an image...I don't know, it was probably more of an image just from my own head. But there is a picture of them that could sort of be used, if they were actually looking at each other in it. I know it was at the top of one of our blog posts here once, but it's Harrison and Carrie standing outside posing and he has just a white linen shirt on and khaki pants and she's in a very simple, flowered dress, and they are both smiling with their hands behind their backs. I kind of saw them looking similar to that.Zyrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04860113813294303312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-39624704317159219992013-05-10T16:21:46.510-05:002013-05-10T16:21:46.510-05:00Smells always elicit a strong memory response for ...Smells always elicit a strong memory response for me, which was why I wanted to use it here to trigger her remembering. I thought it was appropriate :)Zyrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04860113813294303312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-14336990960515172452013-05-10T12:55:17.288-05:002013-05-10T12:55:17.288-05:00Oh, wow. You've raised the bar here Zyra. Each...Oh, wow. You've raised the bar here Zyra. Each chapter just keeps getting better and better. I'm so intrigued with where Push will take this! Honestly, I can empathise with Leia so much here, even though I've never been in this situation before (obviously and thank god for that haha) but the way you've written this, her feelings are just so palpable and raw here. I feel as if I'm experiencing it with her. Needless to say, I am so looking forward to doing a celebratory fist pump when they finally get over their egoic B.S and get on with the lovin' :D<br /><br />Incredibly well written. Brava! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-86669258943977253872013-05-10T06:56:17.345-05:002013-05-10T06:56:17.345-05:00So I'll stop lurking and say.. probably more t...So I'll stop lurking and say.. probably more than you think ARE reading it and are into it. I get all excited when I come to the site and see JOINT STORY across the top. And it does count if we read it over and over again as I've been doing. Can't wait for more! (And please let Han get something out of this... I feel bad for him.. so much patience and angst and Leia is taking him through the ringer.)TooOldForThishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06669513923795537051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-56268662968846163242013-05-10T03:42:10.449-05:002013-05-10T03:42:10.449-05:00I love that chapter! :) I was thinking about you y...I love that chapter! :) I was thinking about you yesterday and wondering, if there will be a new chapter soon and here it is! :D<br /><br />Do you have some particular image that inspired you write that paragraph: "The recording began with a shot of both Han and Leia, Han standing proudly with a big grin on his face, a little more dressed up than his normal outfit, and Leia suddenly remembered him wearing that on the night they’d gone out. Hanging on his arm was a woman that looked so elated that at first Leia didn’t think it could possibly be her. She looked genuinely happy, which was an emotion Leia couldn’t remember having felt since before Alderaan had been destroyed. Those drugs must’ve had some effect because she knew she wasn’t that good of an actress."<br /><br />Lily Skywalkernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-60375261957864810132013-05-09T23:09:41.148-05:002013-05-09T23:09:41.148-05:00I love that it's her sense of smell that trigg...I love that it's her sense of smell that triggers the memories! Fragrance is such a direct route to emotion and memory: it worked perfectly for me.<br /><br />NOW, on to the real question that that you posed in the chap: what is real and what isn't? <br /><br />Or we could just see some action. You know. Either way is fine :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16062372303336920420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-27836715659955253832013-05-09T21:35:35.448-05:002013-05-09T21:35:35.448-05:00Again, a wonderful update! I just LOVE this story ...Again, a wonderful update! I just LOVE this story so much and can't wait to see what is coming up next!<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14109753853015666736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-70029141916854268882013-05-09T21:33:27.236-05:002013-05-09T21:33:27.236-05:00If I read it over and over again...does that count...If I read it over and over again...does that count? :)<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14109753853015666736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-47105861679877664982013-05-09T16:20:30.118-05:002013-05-09T16:20:30.118-05:00Totally agree, Push was right because it ROCKS! :)...Totally agree, Push was right because it ROCKS! :) And absolutely, you can't beat the mushy goodness. Can't wait for more.claire1976https://www.blogger.com/profile/04285049568087268653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-82547693178360082212013-05-09T16:08:21.394-05:002013-05-09T16:08:21.394-05:00I usually don't like AU, but I really like thi...I usually don't like AU, but I really like this one. You have managed to channel the angst of the movies into this storyline. But will you just get them together already????!?? OKHotshot77noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-35435140446842060362013-05-09T15:57:26.443-05:002013-05-09T15:57:26.443-05:00I don't blame her. It was awesome, Zyra. How h...I don't blame her. It was awesome, Zyra. How happy they were when they got married, what Han said to her afterwards about loving her, Leia warring with herself. Mushy, gushy goodness. :)amara zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03344117896874708549noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-28069445794166933762013-05-09T15:03:40.761-05:002013-05-09T15:03:40.761-05:00This is true, I did ask her that. I'm not sur...This is true, I did ask her that. I'm not sure I'd ever seen her so thrilled with something I'd written before.Zyrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04860113813294303312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-11492682931153989362013-05-09T14:57:01.820-05:002013-05-09T14:57:01.820-05:00When I first read this I replied so enthusiastical...When I first read this I replied so enthusiastically to Zyra that she had to ask me if I was being facetious. :-)<br /><br />I just really, really enjoyed reading them watching their wedding holo and thought it was not only a great idea, but done really well. Great job, Zyra.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-46003447705911359322013-05-09T14:28:48.479-05:002013-05-09T14:28:48.479-05:00Good chapter... I am looking forward to more.Good chapter... I am looking forward to more.Lizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08112524366742069257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-60448565765925495642013-05-09T14:05:26.617-05:002013-05-09T14:05:26.617-05:00Thanks for the reviews, guys. It's always nic...Thanks for the reviews, guys. It's always nice when you really seem to like a chapter of this thing.<br /><br />Though, for the record, this is kind of one of the reasons we won't be doing another one of these. Evidence suggests that not a lot of you really are reading it or just aren't particularly into it.Zyrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04860113813294303312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-71539797259524852322013-05-08T19:31:44.041-05:002013-05-08T19:31:44.041-05:00First off, always excited to see a new chapter of ...First off, always excited to see a new chapter of this posted. <br /><br />Second, when I first read that there was a holo of their wedding, I was very giddy with excitement, and my expectations for it were blown away by what came next. Reading about Leia and Han watching themselves acting so in love and happy with each other was amazing. And Leia warring with herself over whether it was the drugs or her true feelings were the root of those holo actions was the icing on the cake. No, wait, the icing and sprinkles on the cake was Leia possibly accepting that she wanted to continue how happy and in love that couple on the holo were together. :)Charhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01569757105389994513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-90990147878228714272013-05-08T17:33:34.104-05:002013-05-08T17:33:34.104-05:00That was emotional and painful and wonderful. Oh...That was emotional and painful and wonderful. Oh, I hope they pull it together. I'm cheering for them. <br /><br />They really do have a love that surpasses understanding by most.StatsGrandma's Office Hourshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06128031887455320394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-28083019627312626942013-05-08T17:27:44.518-05:002013-05-08T17:27:44.518-05:00This may just be my favorite chapter!This may just be my favorite chapter!Princess of the Scoundrelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06709631200517715506noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-21521410647167853672013-05-08T17:07:06.917-05:002013-05-08T17:07:06.917-05:00Absolute genius chapter. Never thought for a secon...Absolute genius chapter. Never thought for a second we would get all the wedding details like that, and especially Leia having to watch it all back, and I think I was as shocked as she was as to how it all played out. The next chapter is going to be quite a ride I think. Brilliant Zyra. claire1976https://www.blogger.com/profile/04285049568087268653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4591963962547240042.post-26743495361478574232013-05-08T16:20:23.311-05:002013-05-08T16:20:23.311-05:00Wow, Zyra. That's some chapter. I like it. Int...Wow, Zyra. That's some chapter. I like it. Interesting they had to watch the video and Leia is now remembering. I bet Push will have fun with this. :) Well done.amara zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03344117896874708549noreply@blogger.com