Here is another one by StatsGrandma, a newcomer to our fandom. You guys better get on top of your writing because she is outdoing most of you with submissions and she's only been here a week ;)
I CONFESS
Takes place at the victory celebration on Endor.
"Falling for
You" is by Colbie Caillat. I am
stealing her song.
"You wanted
this?" Lando Calrissian said to Han
Solo, handing him a fairly large and somewhat oddly shaped case that Han had
requested he remove from the Falcon.
"Yeah, that's
the one. I'm amazed, you got it right on
your first try," Han said, grinning
at his friend.
"You gonna
tell me what's in there?" Lando
asked curiously.
"Nope."
Lando went off in
search of intoxicants. There was no
shortage of them, and most of the celebrants were holding up their end.
Han scanned the
crowd, looking for his beloved Leia.
She'd been dancing with Luke, but Luke had found someone else to dance
with, and Han chuckled. Luke had grown
from a complaining farmboy to a Jedi master, a transition Han was glad he'd
never had to make; things had been hard enough without what he considered the
complications of the force. It wasn't lost on Han that the woman Luke was
keeping company with was indeed beautiful.
Good, he thought. He won't go
chasing after either of us.
Han finally located
her dancing with Wicket. He wasn't that
much shorter than she was, and she was laughing as she and the creature moved
across the ground.
"May I cut
in?" Han said to Wicket. Wicket glared at him, but Han didn't care.
"Thanks for
saving me," Leia said sotto
voce. "I was afraid he was never
going to let go."
"Should I be
jealous?" Han winked at her.
"Oh,
please," Leia groaned. The corners of her mouth turned up in a wide
smile. "I'm amazed that you're
still sober."
"Feel like
cutting out for a while?" Han said, giving her his most seductive smile.
"I could use
the break."
"Let's make a
run for it before anyone sees us."
The two ran hand in
hand, laughing happily as they made their way to a clearing Han, unbeknownst to
Leia, had chosen while there was still daylight. He'd left a backpack there that contained
some of the essentials.
Leia looked to sit
down, but Han stalled her. He opened the
backpack and removed two soft blankets, spreading one of them on the ground.
"It wouldn't
do for a princess to have to sit in the dirt," he teased.
He was pulling her leg; she'd gotten down and dirty all the way down the
line. He liked that that didn't bother
her. But they weren't fighting a war
tonight. Tonight, there was peace in the
galaxy, and the sky gleamed with a creamy white moon and hundreds of millions
of stars that gleamed.
"This is
nice," Leia said, smiling shyly at
him.
"We may be
members of the tribe, but I think I've had enough mobile rugs for one
night," he said to her. "They really have bad breath."
This caused Leia to
burst into laughter. "They do,
don't they?"
"And their
idea of ale...I could burn a hole in my stomach just thinking about it. I'm ready for some lager that isn't
rotgut. What about you?"
Han sensed that she
was nervous, as if she and he both knew of what was to come that evening, but
neither had spoken of it. Yet. Han went to the backpack again. "I've been saving this," he told
Leia as he produced a bottle of Alderaanian Emera wine. He pulled out two glasses and took the opener
he carried on his belt to uncork it.
"You went all
the way to Nenmo's for this?" It
touched her heart that he would have gone out of the way to find a reminder of
her vanished home. "When did you do
that?"
"I asked
Admiral Ackbar to send me to Cularin." Han grinned at her again. "He said fine, so long as I brought him
back some celebrity bobbleheads."
"Some
what?"
"Guy collects
'em."
Leia laughed. "Funny, Admiral Ackbar doesn't strike me
as the tacky tchotchke type."
"Everyone's
got a secret," Han said,
laughing. He sat next to Leia, pulling
her close and touching his lips to hers.
They held the kiss for a long while, his tongue darting against hers
enough to make her moan softly.
Gods, he wanted
her. Wanted her so much. He sensed that she wanted him, too, but was
rather nervous about the whole intimacy business.
"So what's
your secret, Flyboy?" she asked
teasingly.
Han reached over
and grabbed the case Lando had brought to him.
"This."
"What is
it?" Leia asked, with some
trepidation.
"It's a
guitar. The Emera wine wasn't all I
bought at Nenmo's." He began to
open the case.
"It reminds me
a little of a Jinda. Or a Zeltron lute."
"But with a
much sweeter sound."
Leia watched as
Han's hands moved deftly to the tuning pegs.
He began to adjust them, trying to get them in tune as he used his other
hand to play each string and then form them into an arpeggio to make sure they
were properly in tune.
"It has a
lovely timbre," Leia agreed.
"I never knew you were musical."
"It's not
something I exactly put out as a public service announcement." His hands
were involved in practice scales.
"For one thing, I'm not that good."
"If your hands
are half as good on the guitar as they are on me, I'm expecting more than
that," Leia said, blushing a
little.
"It's not just
the guitar. I've got a confession to
make."
"Let's hear
it," Leia said teasingly, but her
expression was gentle and soft.
"I like love
songs. Really sappy ones. There, now you can make fun of me."
Leia leaned in to
kiss him again. "I consider this to
be an amazing new dimension about the man I love." She kissed him
again. "So what can you play?"
"Mostly
instrumentals," he said. Having gotten the instrument tuned, left hand
formed chord patterns as his right hand moved over the strings. Leia gasped as she grasped what he was
playing. It was a love song that had
been popular in Alderaan for centuries.
He played several selections from traditional Alderaanian music. Leia's eyes filled with tears, but she
couldn't help but smile.
Just watching his
hands was stirring deep emotions in her. "I told you, I'm no pro,"
Han said at the conclusion of a half dozen songs from Leia's home world.
"Han, they're
beautiful. I can't believe that you're
this good, only because I've never heard you practice. How long have you been doing this?"
"About five
standard years now. I'd practice in the
cargo hold, where I couldn't be heard, because when I was first learning,
Chewie had a number of unflattering comments about suffering through my
practice sessions."
Leia giggled,
sipping her wine. "You play
beautifully. Let me ask you: do you
sing?"
"Okay, now
we're moving into dangerous territory here," Han said, a little nervously. "As I said, I play mostly
instrumentals."
"I don't know
if I've ever mentioned it, but one of the things I love about you is your
voice, especially when you're alone with me.
It's soothing. All right, not
when you're cursing in 600 dialects about the hyperdrive on the Falcon, but
when we're away from everyone, you speak very softly." She kissed him again. "Please sing something for me."
"You're gonna
scream and run. You've been
warned." He cleared his
throat. "This is something I picked
up at Nenmo's about three years ago.
It's from Earth in the early 21st Century. It's about...it's about how I felt...when I
met you." He hesitated. "Please stop me at any time. The vocal line's a little thin."
Han took a deep
breath and began the song.
"I don't know
but/I think I may be falling for you/dropping so quickly/maybe I should/keep
this to myself/Waiting till I know you better/I am trying/not to tell you/but I
want to/scared of what you'll say/and so I'm hiding/what I'm feeling/but I'm
tired of holding this inside my head/I've been spending all my time/just
thinking about you/I don't know what to do/I think I'm falling for you/I've
been waiting all my life/and now I've found you/I don't know what to do/I think
I'm falling for you/falling for you..."
"As we're
standing here/and you hold my hand/pull me towards you/and we start to
dance/all around us/I see nobody/here in silence/it's just you and me/I am
trying not to tell you/but I want to/scared of what you'll say/and so I'm
hiding/what I'm feeling/but I'm tired of holding this inside my head/I've been
spending all my time/just thinking about you/I don't know what to do/I think
I'm falling for you/I've been waiting all my life/but now I've found you/I
don't know what to do/I think I'm falling for you/falling for you..."
"Oh, I just
can't take it/my heart is racing/emotions keep spinning out..."
"I've been
spending all my time/just thinking about you/I don't know what to do/I think
I'm falling for you/I've been waiting all my life/and now I've found you/I
don't know what to do/I think I'm falling for you/falling for you/I can't stop
thinking about it/I want you all around me/and now I'm scared I am/I think I'm
falling for you/falling for you/I can't stop thinking about it/I want you all
around me/and now I am scared I am/I think I'm falling for you/falling for
you/oh no no/oh no no/falling for you."
Leia smiled at him
with a tenderness with even more depth than before. "I love you."
"I
know." He looked up
hesitantly. "It wasn't
terrible."
"It was
wonderful."
"Well, you are
quite the inspiration."
"And you
mine," she said gently. "Is there anything else you can
play?"
"Well..." he had to catch his bearings again. "I can play a Corellian wedding
march. But I think before that, I'd
better have a bride."
Leia looked upon
him. "Did you have anyone specific
in mind?"
"As a matter
of fact," Han said, very
softly. He set the guitar down and knelt
before Leia. "Leia Organa, will be
you be my wife?"
She paused for a
moment, and then smiled radiantly.
"Yes. On one
condition."
"And that
is?"
"That you
never stop playing love songs."
"Deal."
Thanks for the submission! And as always, comments are encouraged and welcomed. As are more submissions!
Have to admit, the premise sounds pretty cheesey...Han confesses to playing the guitar and sings Leia a soppy love song, and in the wrong hands it could have been awful. But you make it absolutely adorable. Honestly they are so cute in this and I think you have a good feel for dialogue. Looking forward to seeing more stuff from you, liking what you've done so far.
ReplyDeleteOne teeny tiny criticism, you could maybe lose the reference to Earth, kind of takes you out of the story a bit. But other than that, good job! :)
And I'm glad you decided to hop on the Han and Leia bus! Enjoy the ride!
I think your criticism is perfectly valid and I will remember that as I move along. Believe it or not, I appreciate it.
ReplyDeleteCool! :) I was worried I would come across as nitpicking. Not my intention at all. Just friendly advice.
DeleteOh and I forgot to add that I LOVE that Ackbar collects bobbleheads. There's something very cute about that. :)
And now I realize I didn't put an interrog after 'it wasn't terrible,' and that should have been there.
ReplyDeleteThat was great
ReplyDeleteAwww, that was adorable. I have to agree though, if done the wrong way it would have gone horribly sappy. C: You did a good job on it.
ReplyDeleteOh, and before I forget, hi I'm Cinquain and I used to be a lurker until I realized you don't have to sign up with Blogspot anymore. :D I love everything you guys put up here.
Thank you all for reading, commenting and advising! Two things to keep in mind about me: I am 1) a rank sentimentalist and 2) a hopeless romantic.
ReplyDeleteI, too, love everything that's written here. Very high quality. The writers of the EU novels (some of which are very good, others godawful) should write so well.
Awww. That was very sweet. I like her condition. You do write it in quite a believable way and a good feel for their dialogue. Cute.
ReplyDeleteThat was funny and beautifull story. Didn't imagine Han singing or playing the guitar, though! :D
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